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Portal To the Sky

You in focus, world a blur
My eyes trapped in deep allure
Racing heart and soul endure
Caging love in self demure
You are a king as you appear
Hair cusps at your ears;
Hanging crowns.

As shooting stars drag my dreams
Over and across the blue marine
To the next world of hopeless gleams
An hoard of wishes and obscene
For your voice to caress my face;
Lullabies.

Across my eyes you skim
you step, you dance, you spin,
Smiling with your sideways grin
You give me goosebumps, out and in
Read the braille on my skin
An alphabet of three repeated words;
I love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/16/2009 3:54:00 PM
magical, mystical, great poetry, love it! Jim
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Date: 2/22/2009 9:58:00 PM
I'm not familiar with your work but so far it is great. Nice use of imagery...Raul
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Date: 11/1/2008 7:15:00 PM
Alyssa - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/31/2008 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on making the semi-finals! Laura :)
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Date: 10/28/2008 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2008 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2008 6:32:00 PM
Wow, this is amazing...so very talented and deep! Congrads on being featured! Regards, Sara
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Date: 9/29/2008 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write! I love the title! Laura :)
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Date: 9/24/2008 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations Alyssa on "Portal To The Sky" being featured. Vince
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Date: 9/23/2008 1:33:00 PM
The title is so creative. Interesting reflection on love. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/22/2008 6:40:00 AM
Congrats Alyssa on your amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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