Jay Del Fierro Poet Free verse

Portal of Life's Dream....

As he approaches the barlit entry
stopping momentarily...to look,
into the reflection of plateglass,
he wonders,as a straigtened collar refits itself...

Will this be the life changing moment,
another of life's portals entered,
mysteriously anticipated,nervously 
awaiting are two hearts,hopeful...

Envisioning through the eye of soul,
a new sparkling portal...he enters smiling...

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Derrick Burton August 31, 2008 at 10:47 AM wow, been reading you and I really like your gifts with words and reality, and how you put them together with both. great poem.

Lucinda Bulger August 30, 2008 at 9:27 AM wow...how intriguing. I like the unknown factor in this and the way you closed it was awesome, leaves the reader to wonder a bit and be hopeful for him. Just fantastic!

Sara Lokken August 6, 2008 at 2:01 PM Wow, a beautiful inspirational piece! A lot of thoughts to contemplate as well. Regards, Sara:)

Sharon Winter August 1, 2008 at 7:35 AM Ooh, so hoping it is a portal of love. lol! Love this continuation of Kristin's poem. Nicely done Jay. Feeling like I'd want to try to add a third. Love, Shar

Phyllis Babcock July 31, 2008 at 9:38 PM Wouldn't time portals be fantastic. An awesome poem Jay. God Bless Phyl

Michael Jordan July 31, 2008 at 9:22 PM Jay - You do have a special gift indeed - I always enjoy your poetry - God Bless Jay

Kristin Reynolds July 31, 2008 at 10:05 AM YAY! A happy ending to my poor, lady at the bar...ya gotta love a happy ending and a good, open portal. :) Awesome, my friend. I don't mind a bit, actually this story could go on a bit more...who wants to write the next verse to our story? lol Love Kristin