Portal

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Written, January 14, 2024
For The Contest, “Precipice, Portal, Perpetual Words”
Sponsor, Constance La France

What is this Portal like- the one at death? What does the soul envision in this stance of where or when we take our final breath? Do visions fly before us like a trance as we're pulled in by Heaven's bright expanse? This portal- there to glean eternal souls from flesh and bone humanity had made; to cast aside our world of earthly goals with temporary bodies, soon decayed- and walk through Heaven's Portal- unafraid!

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Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2024 6:17:00 AM

Sandra, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image too, hugs, Constance

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/13/2024 5:12:00 PM

Constance, thank you for your visit, congrats, and uplifting comment! I enjoyed writing for your contest. Hugs, Sandra

The Situation

Date: 1/14/2024 3:01:00 PM

This poem speaks vey wisely. And opens the mind to deep thought.I have to fav it.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/17/2024 6:25:00 PM

Thank you for visiting my poem, for your uplifting comment, and for the fav! Much appreciated. Sandra