Porridge

Ready brek is super smooth Porridge in your bowl Steaming hot, delicious oats For when you’re on the go So for those winter mornings Why not try a bowl Be nice and warm on the inside And have an instant glow To make it, it’s so easy Just stir in some hot milk Then your lovely porridge Will come out smooth as silk It’s full of rich vitamins Calcium for your bones And it’s the one and only Ready brek original © Copyright K.C.Leake 13th December 2015 All Rights Reserved

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/14/2015 5:38:00 AM

A smoooth piece! Although I HATE porridge, this is a superbly written piece and certainly highlights all of porridge's advantages. Best wishes, Keith

Kevin Leake
Date: 12/15/2015 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Keith, Appreciate your comments Best Wishes Kevin

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2015 7:54:00 PM

so in your country does porridge mean oatmeal? I always thought the three bears were eating soup. hahaha. Is Brek the name brand of it. We got Quaker oats!! this was cute.

Kevin Leake
Date: 12/14/2015 5:33:00 AM

Yes, Andrea, And that's the name brand. It's like Quaker oat's, but its instant. Mind you so are a lot of meals these days!! Glad you enjoyed it!! Best Wishes Kevin

Sucheta Dutt

Date: 12/13/2015 4:51:00 AM

nice write.....

Kevin Leake
Date: 12/14/2015 5:34:00 AM

Thanks Sucheta, Glad ypou liked it!! Best wishes Kevin