Porcupine Love

There was a girl that once loved me,
She was all furry like a kitten,
Ever cute, ever radiant she was,
I was the opposite,
I was covered with quills all over,
So rough and rugged like a King’s meadow that had turned to hay,
But drawn to each other were we,
We who knew no love,
I knew no love because I never loved myself,
I was my worst critic,
And she knew no love because no one showed her how to,
But drawn to each other were we, 
Like unlike poles of a magnet,
And whenever we tried to touch, we repelled,
I was too much of a pain for her as she was for me,
So one by one, she plucked the quills off my body,
And each time, I felt the pain of having a part of me being removed,
But as soon as all my quills were gone,
Then, and only then did she realize,
That the time I had quills, was when I was the most beautiful,
Now with scars all over my body, she just remembered,
Marshmallows would’ve just been enough, 
Enough to cover my flaws, so that we could love again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 10:11 AM
Hello Kingsley Adu-boffour, so nice to meet you. this is a sad poem of wanted love that went wrong. Enjoy y9ur day my friend.
Adu-Boffour Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 12:33 AM
Thanks
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October 24, 2021 at 10:12 AM
I hope you are having a nice day.
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