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Porch Time

A line of striated cobalt clouds
Lies across the rising sun
Colors separate the image
Magenta so much fun

A yellow illumination
Above the cobalt blue
Revealing early morning's fog
And trees damp with dew

Wispy clouds dance ballerina moves
Mourning Dove's sing love's tune
Roosters rejoice at a new day
Glad the sun arrived so soon

Porch time is limited today
Those chores need to be done
Help me get through every hour
Let there be delightful fun  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sirak Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Wow! I am ready for some time on the porch watching clouds dance!!
La France Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 6:20 AM
Sara, your writing is always so soothing and lovely, impressive 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Oxford
Horne Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 5:22 PM
so glad to see more of your lovely porch inspiration here!
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 3:34 PM
yes, get through those chores and let the good times ROLL!!!! Nicely done, Sara.
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 7:33 AM
such wonderful wonder imagery Sara i will always think of whispy clouds being like ballerinas now - simply delightful:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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