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Porcelain Dancing Statuette

Statuesque, graceful beauty dancing with joy Porcelain glazed skin and delicate features Southern belle of the ball, your day has passed Dandy boys desire your loving affections Porcelain glazed skin and delicate features Strong of will to take this life by the hand Dandy boys desire your loving affections Ready for action, a survivor to behold Strong of will to take this life by the hand Southern belle of the ball your day has passed Ready for action, a survivor to behold Statuesque, graceful beauty dancing with joy! For the Pantoum contest, Thanks for the challenge! This was chosen to be published.

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Raul Moreno

Date: 5/17/2010 10:03:00 PM

Nice Pantoum Doris and best of luck in the contest...Raul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/17/2010 3:36:00 AM

Wow! Doris this looks very amazing done, good luck in the contest, also many thanks to you for all the lovely comments. Have your self good morning,..p..d

Rick Parise

Date: 5/16/2010 6:27:00 PM

WOW is that a goody~I love it when they come together so sweet!!~That one flows like know other!!!superb Doris ~~Enjoyed!!thanks for all your kind words re:my poems so very nice~~God bless you and may he inspire you to greater heights!~~Your friend Rick~Forgot to tell you I will be becoming a life timer very soon(membership)~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/16/2010 5:25:00 PM

Great write...Not easy to write are they...Keep the creativ pen flowing..Mom

John Freeman

Date: 5/16/2010 12:21:00 PM

I like it Doris, good job. Good luck in the competition. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/16/2010 5:08:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your entry for the contest today, Doris! Best of luck! Thanks for your kind comments and have a nice Sunday...Gert

David Byrne

Date: 5/15/2010 6:02:00 PM

You got the atmosphere perfectly!

Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/15/2010 4:33:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this vivid Pantoum.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 7:10:00 PM

Oh Doris this is precious as I can see that little darling girl u described in other poems and Sara too ..this one should be among the top ten for sure..good luck... have had some eye surgery this morning and am blurry and foggy .. so forgive typos ... need laser on both eyes in June.. another birthday...another dilemma...haha..luv.. Linda-Marie.

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/14/2010 9:49:00 AM

Nice imagery with this. Good luck in the contest. Dan C

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/14/2010 8:01:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this nice entry, Doris.....Jimmy