Porcelain Dancing Statuette

Statuesque, graceful beauty dancing with joy
Porcelain glazed skin and delicate features
Southern belle of the ball, your day has passed
Dandy boys desire your loving affections
Porcelain glazed skin and delicate features
Strong of will to take this life by the hand
Dandy boys desire  your loving affections
Ready for action, a survivor to behold
Strong of will to take this life by the hand
Southern belle of the ball your day has passed
Ready for action, a survivor to behold
Statuesque, graceful beauty dancing with joy!

For the Pantoum contest, Thanks for the challenge!
This was chosen to be published.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Moreno Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 10:03 PM
Nice Pantoum Doris and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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May 17, 2010 at 3:36 AM
Wow! Doris this looks very amazing done, good luck in the contest, also many thanks to you for all the lovely comments. Have your self good morning,..p..d
Kendrick Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 5:25 PM
Great write...Not easy to write are they...Keep the creativ pen flowing..Mom
Freeman Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 12:21 PM
I like it Doris, good job. Good luck in the competition. Agape, Moses
Knop Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 5:08 AM
Enjoyed reading your entry for the contest today, Doris! Best of luck! Thanks for your kind comments and have a nice Sunday...Gert
Byrne Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 6:02 PM
You got the atmosphere perfectly!
Hilliker Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 4:33 PM
Good luck in the contest with this vivid Pantoum.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 7:10 PM
Oh Doris this is precious as I can see that little darling girl u described in other poems and Sara too ..this one should be among the top ten for sure..good luck... have had some eye surgery this morning and am blurry and foggy .. so forgive typos ... need laser on both eyes in June.. another birthday...another dilemma...haha..luv.. Linda-Marie.
Cwiak Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 9:49 AM
Nice imagery with this. Good luck in the contest. Dan C
Anderson Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 8:01 AM
Good luck in the contest with this nice entry, Doris.....Jimmy
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