Popeye and Olive Oyl

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Popeye
Eats spinach and feels spry
Gains superhuman strength
Keeps Bluto at arm’s length

Olive Oyl
Is Popeye’s foil
Often kidnapped by Bluto
Whom Popeye then punches to Pluto.


08.31.2021



For Joseph May's "Cleritoons" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 9/30/2021 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun "Popeye and Olive Oyl" write and pictures. So Cute. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 9/28/2021 1:14:00 PM
Congrats on well deserved win. I actually did not use the word spry at first. I had used Popeye the Sailor man as my first line and was told it was too much (to pare it down to Popeye, and spry is pretty much all I was left with, for the point I was trying to make.) Originally I said how he squeezed spinach from a can!!
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Date: 9/28/2021 10:45:00 PM
Same here, I too had used Popeye the Sailor man, ate spinach from a can:) then had to change it to Popeye only...
Date: 9/28/2021 6:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jo, Very nicely done
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Date: 9/27/2021 5:18:00 PM
these are such fun , many congrats on your win Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/1/2021 11:55:00 AM
Oh oh oh... I love Popeye! Awesome. You did a great job. God bless you. Love - Gina
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Date: 8/31/2021 1:33:00 PM
oh thankfully ours are very different, yet capturing the same message!! LOVE how you did yours especially the Pluto line.
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Date: 8/31/2021 10:47:00 AM
Punches to Pluto! Awesome!
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Date: 8/31/2021 4:53:00 AM
Lovely, takes one back to childhood.
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Date: 8/31/2021 1:08:00 AM
Well that took me right back to my childhood Jo, time is going too fast. Tom
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Date: 8/30/2021 11:01:00 PM
I learned Hypocrisy from Popeye. Eats spinach once but smokes pipe all the time .It is a good poem ,relates to so many people .
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Date: 8/30/2021 10:39:00 PM
Good one, Jo.. good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/30/2021 10:33:00 PM
Loved your poem. Three famous characters. Hugs.
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