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The sky has put the kibosh on shadow The sun seeks a slice of shade But, alas, all in vain ____________________________________________ 03/04/2017 Not For Contest

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Date: 4/10/2017 10:11:00 AM
nice poem probir
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/11/2017 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Deeksha ...
Date: 4/6/2017 11:09:00 AM
Not in vain... you saw it and you wrote... beautiful...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/6/2017 10:48:00 PM
Exactly ... Thank you ...
Date: 4/4/2017 8:06:00 AM
Superbly written my friend, Probir! A 7!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/4/2017 11:06:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 4/4/2017 6:36:00 AM
Brilliant kimo... Unique one... A big 7...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/4/2017 11:06:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 4/3/2017 2:00:00 PM
This was clever and creative. Nicely expressed Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/3/2017 11:24:00 PM
Thanks for the appreciation ...

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