Poor Little Mouse

Little mouse ran into
the closet, not
seeing the mouse trap,
such a clatter that
old trap made, poor
little mouse should
have stayed in
the basement.

wrote 8-28-08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 30, 2008 at 7:29 PM
he should have stayed in the basement, I am afraid of mice, D-nyce
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August 30, 2008 at 4:05 PM
Only you can write about something gruesome and make it sound lighthearted and make me smile. Very well done. Regards Heidie
Jordan Avatar
August 30, 2008 at 9:11 AM
Boy I have wars the mice every year at harvest - Your compassion never ceases to amaze me James - God Bless
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