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Poor Little Mouse

Little mouse ran into the closet, not seeing the mouse trap, such a clatter that old trap made, poor little mouse should have stayed in the basement. wrote 8-28-08

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Date: 8/30/2008 7:29:00 PM
he should have stayed in the basement, I am afraid of mice, D-nyce
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Date: 8/30/2008 4:05:00 PM
Only you can write about something gruesome and make it sound lighthearted and make me smile. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/30/2008 9:11:00 AM
Boy I have wars the mice every year at harvest - Your compassion never ceases to amaze me James - God Bless
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