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Poor Little Alien

He got out of his spaceship and looked around No human life form could not be found Where are the humans he thought to himself All inside dear alien protecting our health This alien took his spaceship to another place Hoping to find I'm sure a friendly human face The other place was just the same as before No human life found was strange for sure So into the spaceship this alien decided to go Visiting earth today proved a devastating blow Finally he arrived home on the milky way Thinking he would visit earth another day

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Date: 2/21/2021 5:26:00 PM
I really liked this poem, Kieran, but you might want to take another look at the double negative in the second line. It causes a rather jarring stop. Overall, a very interesting visit!
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Date: 2/21/2021 9:33:00 AM
NICE...
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