Daver Austin Poet Tazkira

Poor Cinderella

POOR CINDERELLA

poor cinderella 
her pumpkin coach was delayed
castle clock struck twelve
once again a chamber maid
the handsome prince was dismayed

she was dressed in rags
her glass slippers were old boots
her hair a disgrace
the prince didn’t give a hoot
he knew that beautiful face

so? what did he do?
i’ll not give you the answer
it is up to you
please write an ending, dear friend
to my comments then please send

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Michelle Mac Donald September 13, 2014 at 3:46 AM She hooked up with The "Emperor's New Clothes" dude and when he went out gallavanting in his new attire, she raided his wardrobe? Before midnight lost one of his oversized shoes when taking flight? Okay, I'm in silly mode.:( Keep well Daver, Love you, Mikki

Sara Kendrick May 9, 2014 at 1:07 PM He saw her what for she was underneath A loving beauty with a soul so sweet He claimed her and dressed her tenderly A woman to love and live with eternally.. Enjoyed your fairly tale..How we all want to live the dream..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2014 at 5:59 PM still waiting for a new poem!! Yes, you are so right on the comment you made to me. The newbies are not getting it. But the newbies with lots of comments under their poems from other poets have mastered the art of poet "Eddicut" haha.

Ana Espinola Collins May 6, 2014 at 2:19 PM Fairy godmother pops in Extends her magical spell Cinderella’s beautiful again The Prince…Well…I’ll never tell ;)

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2014 at 6:09 PM Tim gave you a really good ending I see. HOpe more people do this for ya!!

Andrea Dietrich May 4, 2014 at 9:20 PM He did not care about a gold shoe. Old boots will do. To his castle they flew!!

Tim Smith May 4, 2014 at 3:54 PM he didn't despair.... called out to all of his men.... new clothes for his love.... sent from gods above.... to the ball they dance again