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POOR CINDERELLA

POOR CINDERELLA poor cinderella her pumpkin coach was delayed castle clock struck twelve once again a chamber maid the handsome prince was dismayed she was dressed in rags her glass slippers were old boots her hair a disgrace the prince didn’t give a hoot he knew that beautiful face so? what did he do? i’ll not give you the answer it is up to you please write an ending, dear friend to my comments then please send

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Date: 9/13/2014 3:46:00 AM
She hooked up with The "Emperor's New Clothes" dude and when he went out gallavanting in his new attire, she raided his wardrobe? Before midnight lost one of his oversized shoes when taking flight? Okay, I'm in silly mode.:( Keep well Daver, Love you, Mikki
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Date: 5/9/2014 1:07:00 PM
He saw her what for she was underneath A loving beauty with a soul so sweet He claimed her and dressed her tenderly A woman to love and live with eternally.. Enjoyed your fairly tale..How we all want to live the dream..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 5/6/2014 5:59:00 PM
still waiting for a new poem!! Yes, you are so right on the comment you made to me. The newbies are not getting it. But the newbies with lots of comments under their poems from other poets have mastered the art of poet "Eddicut" haha.
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Date: 5/6/2014 2:19:00 PM
Fairy godmother pops in Extends her magical spell Cinderella’s beautiful again The Prince…Well…I’ll never tell ;)
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Date: 5/5/2014 6:09:00 PM
Tim gave you a really good ending I see. HOpe more people do this for ya!!
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Date: 5/4/2014 9:20:00 PM
He did not care about a gold shoe. Old boots will do. To his castle they flew!!
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Date: 5/4/2014 3:54:00 PM
he didn't despair.... called out to all of his men.... new clothes for his love.... sent from gods above.... to the ball they dance again
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