Poor Alice

Poor Alice - poor alice you messed up and it can’t be fixed you’re trapped and you’ll suffocate down here you can’t get out of this your legs are broken your arms twisted your neck cracked your tears salty no one will save you from your fate poor Alice their filling in the hole with you inside poor Alice you can’t scream the dirt is filling the hole Oh, poor Alice can’t breathe the dirt’s covered poor Alice Welcome to Wonderland...

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Skat A

Date: 11/29/2014 11:33:00 PM

LOVE IT, SO COOL, BELIS, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2014 4:55:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Belis - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)