Poor Alice

Poor Alice -
 poor alice 
you messed up 
and it can’t be fixed 
you’re trapped 
and you’ll suffocate down here 
you can’t get out of this 
your legs are broken 
your arms twisted 
your neck cracked 
your tears salty 
no one will save you from your fate 
poor Alice 
their filling in the hole 
with you inside 
poor Alice 
you can’t scream 
the dirt is filling the hole 
Oh,
poor Alice 
can’t breathe 
the dirt’s covered 
poor Alice 
Welcome to 
Wonderland...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 29, 2014 at 11:33 PM
LOVE IT, SO COOL, BELIS, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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November 23, 2014 at 4:55 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Belis - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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