Poor

here i live in this stinky place
all i have is my bed
i lay thinking what im going to do with my life 
i look around its a damned life for me 
i have always been poor
but i want it to stop and im going to start being brave 
now that i won 
i hope my life will change
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 23, 2010 at 9:08 AM
yes, very optimistic. Your life CAN change if you work hard enough at it, have faith and a little bit of good fortune. Enjoyed this a lot.
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March 23, 2010 at 8:52 AM
The power of positive thinking can make you achieve whatever it is that you desire - Fab share Brandon - Enjoyed the optimiscm in this write -:)
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