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here i live in this stinky place all i have is my bed i lay thinking what im going to do with my life i look around its a damned life for me i have always been poor but i want it to stop and im going to start being brave now that i won i hope my life will change

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/23/2010 9:08:00 AM
yes, very optimistic. Your life CAN change if you work hard enough at it, have faith and a little bit of good fortune. Enjoyed this a lot.
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Date: 3/23/2010 8:52:00 AM
The power of positive thinking can make you achieve whatever it is that you desire - Fab share Brandon - Enjoyed the optimiscm in this write -:)
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