Pool of Tears

Diving in seeking for solace
And a peaceful release of thoughts
Inner quiet in a place of promise
Creates a rhythmic song and a waltz
 
Initial cold shocks the senses
And a realization there is no breath
Memories hurt. Up with defenses
Fearing now for a sudden death
 
Completely surreal. Just surrender
Drowning now. Is there no escape?
Flooded with tears without an offender
The mental screams begin to take shape
 
Plunging deeper, streamline surreal
Kicking hard and longing for survival
 In poetic movement. A chance to heal
Surfacing again. A hope for revival
 
An arm points forward to show the way
The other motions back to where it's been
A labored dance to motion the cares away
In rhythm to propel, flip, and spin again
 
Distance covered in a pool of tears
Aqua blue represents the entire mood
Troubled thoughts washed in prayers
Stroke to stroke to become subdued
 
Streamline to memories once again
Kick to the surface to catch a breath
Distance covered to numb the pain
In a pool of tears to a mental death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jones Avatar
January 20, 2026 at 11:00 AM
Michael congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! I especially enjoyed these lines, Distance covered in a pool of tears Aqua blue represents the entire mood Troubled thoughts washed in prayers Stroke to stroke to become subdued" I found your poem somber but beautiful. Thanks for your entry! Blessings!
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2026 at 5:26 PM
You are most welcome!
Malone Avatar
January 20, 2026 at 2:01 PM
Thank you I greatly appreciate it
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