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Pool of Blood

Frantic, cleanliness, cleanliness Blood is thicker than water The blood is thicker, clotting, clotting The bandages and duct tape Plaster of Paris, a perfect cast Without a script, no stage left No stage right, the operating theatre The scalpel caught a glimpse of light Asleep, breathing, breathing The magic milk, intravenously The milk medication, choking, choking The bed is stained with crimson paint Like a miscarriage, waking to find The foot of the bed, a flame landscape Of deep shades of dark, bruised white Flowing intravenously, off to sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/4/2009 12:50:00 PM
SWEET POEM!!!!! I love IT!!! I love the it flows. . I wrote you
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Date: 12/30/2008 1:28:00 PM
Vibrant imagery and visceral language... a la Plath I would say. Effective repetitions... Welkl done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/27/2008 11:53:00 AM
Nathaniel - very deep poetry - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/27/2008 9:25:00 AM
I hope your foot is doing ok now..At first when I clicked on, I thought surely there would be some guts hanging...wow what a relief! I loved it...keep up the good work...Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
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