Pool Day
One day we were at the pool.
Jumping off the diving board !
That was a big jump.
! They just did belly smackers.
I would not do a belly smacker.
It would hurt.
! That was a perfect dive.
They were running around the pool.
It was very slippery.
! They all fell.
The the life guards were yelling.
The pool was packed everyone was yelling.
Then ! Everyone went silent.
That was the biggest splash ever.
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