Ponderings On a Friend's Evening

so - did ya?
did ya go to the open mic?
did ya go on ya bike?
did ya stand on the stage?
full of angst and rage?
or spout forth good cheer
did ya overcome ya fear?
despite the cold,
did ya act all bold?
...
or stay at home in ya bed
feeling sorry with dread

...

that's cool too
we just care about you

....

well...

did ya?


(C) Ian Diddams 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 27, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Title drew me in on account of it looking different...And I was right - it is different - Excellent, T. Didds! My best regards...And a much deserved seven. :) john
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