Pondering the Pavement

It wasn’t until they dug it up,
and gluggy clay stuck to the road-machine, 
that you understood it was thin like icing.

Until we walked the dog daily,
you never stood on it mindlessly staring 
at patterns of pink-yellow tree-bark peeling.

Concrete-veneer smacks our feet, 
then it’s just dirt and rock, down, down,
all the way to the centre of the earth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Crandall Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Cool! I used to like to think about what's under, way down there!
Swan Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 9:43 PM
Yes, it looks neat, but muddy underneath. Kids think more than busy adults sometimes. Thanks for visiting.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 5:59 AM
Well done! Thumbs up!
Swan Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Thanks for your encouragement :)
Miller Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 1:51 AM
Brilliant!
Swan Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 4:50 AM
Thanks:) Glad you liked this one. Plaster walls also seemed more solid as a child, until running for 'bar' and making a hole in one!
Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 4:53 AM
Creative work for sure. It is hot, rough and supposedly a safe place to walk. I think this one is a good contender for the contest for sure. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Swan Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 2:15 PM
Thanks Sara. J :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 5:11 PM
how unimportant pavement is, thin like icing. best wishes with this contest entry
Swan Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 8:37 PM
Thanks for your frequent encouragement. The first bit is a childhood memory. J :)
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