Pondering

waves
going up
and down.

soft
footsteps on
the ground.

unfamiliar
empty
space.

ocean
spray on
my face.

water
skimming
my bare feet.

two
lovers
never meet.

broken
shards of
my heart.

all my
life is this
of part.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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H. Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 8:28 PM
thank you for your kind words(:
Hilliker Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 8:18 PM
Pondering is a good thing. Nicely written.
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