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Pond Disturbance - Haiku

Pond Disturbance - Haiku pond remains still born clear, no bottom, quiet, cold wind folds a ripple

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Date: 4/20/2015 9:12:00 AM
Hi, Earl, I enjoyed reading your pond haiku. Especially liked how you ended it with the ripple of the wind. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 4/20/2015 9:12:00 PM
Hi Darlene, Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate your comments. I am glad you enjoyed my haiku. Have a great evening. Take care. Earl

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