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Pompous Pied Piper

Like the pompous pied piper leading the way,
chirping his tune of a dawning new day,
frustrations were championed, oh how we followed,
the ego stuffed shirt of a suit cold and hollow.

From the top of the hill, he showed us the view,
convincing our eyes it was harshly askew.
Nearing the cliffs as if caught in a spell,
he fed us like lambs from his poisonous well.

Touting sweet taste of his truth well embittered,
ignoring the signs of nonsensical twitter,
rot with the smell of the nations decay,
we drank from his cup of a water so gray.

Watching and waiting for gifts of his gruel,
the masses assured we were not made a fool,
his promise of greatness was all we could see,
with great expectations of how it would be.

There's no turning back once we swore the man in, 
believing bright futures were soon to begin,
blinding frustration gave evil its day
for the pompous pied piper to lead us astray.

He led us to thinking, all driven by fear, 
then gave his directives so cryptically clear,
stripping the values by which we would stand
before the American dream had been banned.

Addicted to all the attention and glory, 
swiftly he moved to remain the top story,
insisting on walls made of concrete and steel
built by the anger and hate we should feel.

Then some were shaken, disrupting his spell
and found he was stealing our Liberty Bell.
The fog began lifting and soon we would see
the piper exposed as the fraud he would be.

               Time has a way, proven over again, 
                   of playing its imminent part.
        The shedding of light upon every mans soul, 
                exposing his darkness of heart.

No longer seduced by the piping we hear, 
choosing to see through the veil,
Democracy once again fights to survive,
let us all pray we prevail!

                              -Jeannie Cronin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hankins Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 11:49 AM
My sentiments exactly, Jeannie. Thanks for calling my attention to this poem. Well-written, well-stated, and worthy of wide disemination.
Cronin Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 2:10 PM
I thought you might feel a connection to this one. Leaves me stupefied as to how to point out what is right in front of everyone’s face. Thanks for the comment
Dome Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 9:06 PM
Donald Trump is a great big lump he looks like a pig with a dodgy wig sucking a lemon. his wife a skull on a bean pole. enough said, nothing personal Mtr Trump. Well done great write Pete.
Cronin Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Hey Pete, I'm a big believer in clarity and you are certainly a respectable achiever of such! How's your grip holding out? Looks like this ride's getting a little bumpier!
Sheehan Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Nice write. Have no fear Jeannie, Democracy will prevail. Very real.
Cronin Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Hi Frank, it’s been almost 5 years now, how solid are still feeling about Democracy and it’s ability to prevail?
Cronin Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Hi Frank, thanks for stopping by. Glad you liked the write. Keeping my fingers crossed!
Ficklin Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 10:01 PM
Very nice flow to a very real message. Fortunately our judicial system is slapping some reality into the new admin. and transparency is more difficult to evade. Even still, like you I pray for us these next four years.
Cronin Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:20 PM
You and a growing many others, Lukas. Thanks for stopping by.
Turner Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 10:36 AM
I say, it's putting the cart before the horse. I didn't vote for the man but I respect the office. We must wait and see. Let democracy work. This country has survived many perils in 200 plus years, we will survive this one. It will probably make us stronger. Cheer up sweetie, everything is gonna be OK:)
Cronin Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 6:08 PM
Still think everything is gonna be ok? Looks to me like the Democratic Republic of the USA as you and I have had the privilege to enjoy is officially endangered as never before.
Cronin Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 3:16 PM
I hope you're right because I've never wanted to be more wrong!
May Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 8:37 AM
I like the pied piper analogy...He wants to bypass the constitution...Great write Jeannie
Cronin Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Thanks, I hope it's not too late before someone stops this crazy train!
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