Pomegranate

I crack a pomegranate every night
Yesterday's juice a sad delight.
Bloody red and faintly sweet
Every kernel a glistening treat.

My teeth stained red from yesterday
Bitter kernels cling to bitter tongue.
Spit the bitterness so far away
Pomegranate dreams for the very young.

Glistening skin is ripened red
Yesterday becomes a crooked crutch.
White skin, red flesh puts pain to bed
Contrast in yesterday's delicate touch.

Break the skin, reveal the treat
Bury the seeds so very deep.
Pomegranate juice so red and sweet,
Regrets are there for me to keep.

I crack a pomegranate every night
Yesterday's juice a sad delight.
And so today forever will pay
For the secret sins of yesterday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/21/2009 5:34:00 AM
Here's one I missed, Heidie. This image and sensory idea is wonderful. I especially like the mystery of the third stanza...still trying to grasp it completely. Where are you, Heidie? I keep looking for a new post from one of my favorite poets. Love, daver
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Date: 12/12/2008 9:24:00 AM
Incredible imagery! I do love pomegranates, but parts of them are quite bitter along with the juicy sweet. Comparing it to life was really inspired. ~Juliane
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Date: 11/30/2008 4:20:00 AM
Dear Heidie - This poem is sure to be a winner! Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/3/2008 12:41:00 PM
Brilliant! Best wishes in the next round, Heidie. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:32:00 PM
Heidie - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/30/2008 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations Heidie on making the semi finals. Thank you for all your kind comments . Good Luck. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Heidie. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:43:00 PM
Heidie Hey, congrats on your wonderful poem making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/27/2008 5:38:00 AM
Warmest congrats dear Heidie on making the first round! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 9/6/2008 9:33:00 AM
Hedi Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem of the week! Laura :)
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Date: 9/2/2008 4:04:00 PM
Congratulations Heidi, on your poem Pomegranate being featured this week. It is thought provoking and well rhymed. Brilliant! -Mohammad
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Date: 9/2/2008 9:45:00 AM
Heidie, Such a beautiful write, it has such a beautiful rythem and a dark alure to it, congrats on having it featured,keep them coming, Mark
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Date: 9/2/2008 9:14:00 AM
That is how I feel about the pomegranite as well! You have described it most vividly!
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Date: 9/2/2008 7:52:00 AM
Refeatured! Congratulations Heidie on "Pomegranate" being featured again. Vince
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Date: 9/1/2008 7:44:00 PM
Heidie - What a gem of a poem - such a simple subject described in a very delicious way - Loved the ending - have you read "The Ladies of Poetry Soup" - Congrats on your fantastic poem being featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 9/1/2008 4:35:00 AM
The color in this poem in awesome, and beautiful in its message, congrats on being featured, love Kristin
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Date: 8/31/2008 9:02:00 PM
Interesting interaction between a fruit and life lessons in this poem. It gives the read pause for reflection. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/31/2008 6:40:00 PM
Heidie, dear Heidie, your poetry astounds me. Please publish a book so I can buy it. Congratulations sweet friend on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love you, Shar
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Date: 8/6/2008 12:16:00 PM
an enjoyable piece of poetry. i liked the idea you came up with. thank you for reading my poem "An Angel Fell From The Sky" and for your very fine comments.
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Date: 7/30/2008 10:26:00 PM
Hello my friend, just talking about them brings back childhood memories. I use to like them although it has been years since I've had any pomegranates, Blessings, Ron
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Date: 7/30/2008 12:58:00 PM
"Yesterday's juice a sad delight. This is a great image, so inventive. Ah yes, I too have tasted the bitter fruit. Beautiful write, Heidie
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Date: 7/9/2008 12:50:00 PM
Such an impressive poem! The comparison of cracking a pomegranate...and real life experiences! Shows such imagination, but also in a down to earth way that we can all relate to! Very nice!! Carrie
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