Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Dizain

Polluted Heart

POLLUTED HEART

Thirsty soil parches in scorching summer
Sucks liquid crystal drops of sparkling rain
Stores in deep aquifer pure groundwater
Brought to surface, pure it doesn’t remain
From humans contaminants it obtains.

Lone heart freezes in the dark of winter
Blooms in joy when colors of spring enter
Weaves tapestry of pristine love within
Abused by black mist of lust it welters
In polluted heart love stops to flow clean.

April 1, 2018
Syllable count: 10 each line
Rhyme : ababb ccdcd

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Susan Gentry April 18, 2018 at 1:33 AM Congratulations on your win with this sad poem. Well done! Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 2:52 AM Thank you, Susan.

Sandra Haight April 17, 2018 at 7:03 PM Powerful, but very true words, Subimal. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 2:52 AM Thank you, Sandra for visiting.

Line Gauthier April 16, 2018 at 2:15 PM Well done, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved placement in this contest. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 2:51 AM Thank you, Line.

Kai Michael Neumann April 16, 2018 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on your win in my contest, Subimal. A wonderful take on the theme. Many wishes, Kai Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 2:51 AM Thank you, Kai for placing the poem.

Nette Onclaud April 1, 2018 at 12:02 PM subimal, heartbreaking and beautiful as you depict the poison from a heart.. huggs Subimal Sinha-Roy April 2, 2018 at 11:29 PM Thank you, Nette for visiting and for your comments. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 2, 2018 at 11:29 PM Thank you, Nette for visiting and for your comments.