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Polluted Heart

POLLUTED HEART
Thirsty soil parches in scorching summer Sucks liquid crystal drops of sparkling rain Stores in deep aquifer pure groundwater Brought to surface, pure it doesn’t remain From humans contaminants it obtains. Lone heart freezes in the dark of winter Blooms in joy when colors of spring enter Weaves tapestry of pristine love within Abused by black mist of lust it welters In polluted heart love stops to flow clean.
April 1, 2018 Syllable count: 10 each line Rhyme : ababb ccdcd

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Date: 4/18/2018 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sad poem. Well done!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 2:52:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 4/17/2018 7:03:00 PM
Powerful, but very true words, Subimal. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 2:52:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra for visiting.
Date: 4/16/2018 2:15:00 PM
Well done, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved placement in this contest.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 2:51:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 4/16/2018 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, Subimal. A wonderful take on the theme. Many wishes, Kai
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 2:51:00 AM
Thank you, Kai for placing the poem.
Date: 4/1/2018 12:02:00 PM
subimal, heartbreaking and beautiful as you depict the poison from a heart.. huggs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/2/2018 11:29:00 PM
Thank you, Nette for visiting and for your comments.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/2/2018 11:29:00 PM
Thank you, Nette for visiting and for your comments.

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