Pollination

As the flowers grow,
The Honeybee's land on them;
And they spread our needs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Esquire Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 4:21 PM
Dear Elizabeth,The Honeybee can not live with out the flowers and flowers without bees I have no Honey Superb Haiku LOVEYOUr POET mind ALWAYS...HG
Gass Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 4:02 PM
This is wonderful! I love the images. I'm looking forward to the spring. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Raul is wonderful poet and a good man. Love, Robin
Winter Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 4:20 AM
Love the symbolic meaning. Awesome haiku! Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 5:09 PM
good job! that is good
Moreno Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 5:09 PM
Great use of imagery, pollination is key for a flowers survival...Raul
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January 15, 2009 at 5:01 PM
Nice use of imagery. Much said in these few words. Keep on writing! Karen
Guzzi Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 2:55 PM
very sweet! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
Riley Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Nice imagery, and it is about nature, but a Haiku usually has three unrhymed lines with syallable counts 5/7/5 , you have 5/7/7, a Tanka has five lines that are 5/7/5/7/7. Thanks for sharring Judy Riley
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