Pollen Presenter

White Daisies
Blown by the soft breeze yield
Downy petals flow malleable

Brave pressures of nature designed to be able
Designed by God is very good acceptable
Sturdy stems golden scented center

The pollen presenter
Field enter

(Second Trois Par Huit..
Different set up.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 1:56 AM
good use of words here thank you duncan
Anderson Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 11:07 PM
Thnx for leaving comments on my piece, Sara also for your kind words of encouragement. I appreciate this. ....Peace, Jimmy
Culverhouse Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 10:47 AM
enjoyed!! I just posted another poem it is depressing... I think.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 9:07 AM
Sweet presentation into the field enter.. luv that line.. a wonderful insight into the white daisies..Sara.. fresh and vibrant.. hope u are all doing well today luv..
Mehta Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 9:05 AM
Yes, I have been a victim of the pollen as returned to USA from India. Sara
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