Political Betrayal

Such promises you made when asking for our vote
But it’s been a year and your vows are now remote

What happened to removing troops from the Mideast
And finding the right recipe for economic relief

Hungry families still living in shabby tents
Unemployed fathers pounding streets as they vent

New foreclosure signs are erected every day
As in Washington with our dollars leaders play

That gleam in your eye once inspired us to have hope
But middle-class tax breaks were not enough to cope

With rising prices at the pumps and in food stores
The uninsured yet sit on emergency room floors

Though you still seem to feel you have us hoodwinked
Betrayal is sensed by those struggling on the brink

We now look to you with accusatory eyes
Wondering how we consumed your pack of lies

Perhaps your intentions were good but believe us
You are not our Savior; His name was Jesus

Although we remain “one (stressed) nation under God”
In your next campaign you won’t get our nod

We’ll just take our cause to a far higher Power
Because in politicians, our trust has been soured


Dedicated to ALL of the politicians who made promises that have not been fulfilled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Callus Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 5:09 PM
History seems to keep repeating itself, Carolyn! Many a time we have been betrayed by politicians, but we go back to vote, hoping that the situation will change. In this poem you have stressed on several points which all too often come up because of their importance, especially for those who are in need. ~ Love & hugs // paul
Moreno Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 7:03 PM
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Brown Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in Starflixer's Betrayal contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Lakhera Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Many congratulations on your win. Politicians are surely doing this every now and then. Good one. Love, Chira. ps thanks for your comments!!
Haick Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Dear Carolyn, my warm congratulations on this wonderful write! Somehow, I missed this! Thank you so much for the kind comments left for me.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your winning poem in the Betrayal contest.. a wonderful write for a wonderful win.. for a wonderful poetess ..and lady...luv.. Linda-Marie..
Mcgovern Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:25 PM
Spoken like a true patriot from the ranks of the silent majority. What you say is sadly, not what I would have dreamed America would be today. There is however, hope when we get angry enough to write and protest though the greatest media..that of the pen, to demonstrate as you have. Spoken word may be dismissed, the written word impacts forever. You hit hard and I hope the truth hurts Washington ang greedy Corporations when America fully awakens. Mac
Georges Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 11:00 PM
I'll admit that your words as well as your message are both beautiful and deserve our respect, but you probably know that already. But I shake my head when one man is blamed for the voting of the multitude. No one who follows and is betrayed has the right to judge, for they chose to be "hoodwinked" in their simple minded faith.
Dvorkis Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Governments represent their people. if the people are so incredibly divided then that's who they'll vote into office. the job is very hard and I still have faith in the man. After 8 years of practically destroying the world, he was the only thing holding it together from complete chaos and another great depression. but that's not good enough, people hate the governemtn, always finding fault and never seeing the bigger picture. I'm sorry but I'm still an Obama fan and his speech was damn good.
Dvorkis Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 2:55 PM
Ah well don't blame me I never voted in Scott Brown, but then I didn't vote in that election. Carolyn with all due respect the man is not a cynical manipulative liar and Jesus would not have governed any differently. I understand if next time around you won't feel the Obama fervor but in all honesty what do you expect from such a Congress? not one Rep. clapped out of turn they're all so whipped.I'm getting tired of people feeling so sour on one man when an entire gov't is made up of more than 1.
Cheeseman Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 10:57 AM
Yours ours they are all the same, I am sure they think we are all fools, great Carolyn you get my backing Daniel
Loving Iii Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 10:00 AM
i have to trust our president to do the best he can with the oppisition he has. people that if he was doing the right thing they would vote against him any way. just like in the O. J. trial it will be easy to seperate the sheep from the goats. their mouths give them away. jhl
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 5:02 PM
The OBAMABLE snow man. I fell for it also, but give the guy a break, he can't blame congress for everything. They are also liberal controlled. Doon't forget POLI (many) TICS (blood sucking insects). Gotta love it. Vince
Ryerson Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 5:59 PM
You nailed it right on the head, Carolyn...I don't trust ANY of them anymore (present administration included, I'm afraid)...Where have you gone, Harry Truman? - Tim
Dufresne Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 5:25 PM
Right on write, Carolyn. great write in my book.. .... thanks for your wonderful remarks on my poem. So glad you enjoyed it.- Robert
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 7:19 AM
many lies are made from people wanting votes but so is the nature of the politcian there to busy fighting with each other to ever realize what matters most good write Carolyn
Fringe Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 12:25 AM
Amen sister. I'll bet the next actor, excuse me, I mean politician will be exactly the same. Same as the next, then the next, then the next................ Machiavelli will always exist. I do agree with you though. David
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 6:35 PM
Gloriously wonderful write.. direct and to the point and I support u totally with your message... if only the politicians would "get a grip" on the reality of things in our world and stop trying to destroy America as it used to be.... bravo.. girl.. bravo... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Culverhouse Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 12:58 PM
good job!! send it to your politicans!
K. Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 8:15 AM
Hi Carolyn--what can I say but this gave me chills after I read this...I don't live in the States but I can see how much your country continues to suffer--I guess anywhere we may be, the sweet words of the politicians are music to our ears during the campaign-but like what you said--what happens after? My country's national elections is this May and it has me scared--thanks for this enlightening write as well as your comments for Memoriver, I am so honored you put it in your faves, thank you :)
Christian Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 8:05 AM
thanks for your kind comments on my poem we will be restored, yes I feel for those in hatti and restoration will come, the peom was written as for me and my sister our lives have come crashing down right before our very eyes but God wil restore us especialy my sisters pain and for her daughter, and thaks for showing me that our pain is nothing compaierd to others in the world we are thankfull that we are safe and well. God bless you from diane
Shoes Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 10:32 PM
The verse was a bit clumsy, the message was unfairly didactic, a tirade against what I interpret our leader - handed pandora's box by the devil, himself,, 'save us!' we cry, after taking the poison of arrogance and wrath,, the surgeon can only follow procedure.. but such wit and elegance, we shall not see again. Yet,, I love a good tirade,, well done! good rhyme that, something with jesus.. I'm surrounded by idiots,, i mean republicans.. oh, thanks for the kinds words!
Nunn Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 2:24 PM
Bravo and I agree one hundred per cent, great write..thanks on High Sheriff..I heard after he got into prison, he still tried to play the Marshal Dillon bit..the inmates whipped on him good and showed him who the law was there..thanks Danny
Austin Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Hi, Carolyn. Would you send me your address. I'd like to send some violin pictures to kind of add image to my novel.I might have your address around but can't find it. BIG LOVE, daver
Strand Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 8:25 AM
An endless number Carolyn.Thank you for your welcome comments today .Rgds Brian
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