Polar Paragons

It seems to me society’s too keen
on variety, trading spouses
in on other ones.  They could, at
least, do as penguins do. . . share
in offspring’s rearing till
their task is done, and
only then. . . start
again with
someone
new!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Watt Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 10:49 PM
Written by the woman who's been married 45 years, haha!
A   Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Good morning, Andrea. ...soup mail
Watson Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 5:44 AM
I'm not married yet but with my luck , I'd go to one of those parties where you trade partners and be offered a new hoover for mine , lol Loved it Andrea , Thank you
Kiser Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 5:06 PM
That would save some heartache and stress. Perhaps folks should consider this.
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 11:04 AM
I don't know which would be worse to be left with a nest full or a nest empty..It is sad when it happens in a family either way..Thanks for the faithful visits to my page..I hope that this is a great day for you..Sara
A   Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 11:33 PM
Hello Andrea, , I did not want to leave you out of my Happy Jolly Momment.. Sending you a Christmas Carol.... -- Dashing through the snow In a one horse open sleigh O'er the fields we go Laughing all the way Bells on bob tails ring Making spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing A sleighing song tonight Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh HEY! :) <-- You got to love it I do hope you sang with me... Goodnight my friend... LINDA
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 6:32 PM
What a brilliant title!!! Excellent advice for those who just cannot stay together. Well done Andrea!! Best wishes, Keith (PS thanks for your kind words on Glow.)
Hamilton Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 7:45 PM
Hi Andrea fauna are much more faithful than us my parents have been together for 64 years rare these days excellent poem ty for visiting my work Shadow x smile hug
Tacito Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 7:56 AM
Yeah, I read an article about "live-in" lovers w/married people about a week ago. What a joke. Seriously, if you're going to do that, just stay single! Though, like you said, the penguins are onto something. =) Nicely done!
Sivey Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 10:36 PM
Loved how you approached this Etheree! I may not be on much for about week, I'm having problems with my teeth, big time pain, I can't seem to get anyone to really help me...I always have to wait until they have an opening for me to get in even if it is an Emergency! So I must wait until Monday, and I am in a lot of pain these days, there are at least 2 teeth that need removal...I'm afraid of having pain all through the weekend! So now think of me these few days! I'll try to get on soon!
Austin Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 10:25 AM
Super Etheree! I know how difficult it is to write in this form. Love, daver
Anish Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 8:58 AM
Stimulating take on relationships. I love penguins and go to see them at the Coney Island aquarium. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Jordan Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 8:56 AM
Yes, that's the very least, although one can always hope and work toward more... Jack
Sirak Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 8:08 AM
Love Etherees! Yours is great with a much needed message.
Fraser Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 10:42 PM
For such a short piece the moral message is very clear, nicely done Andrea
Johnson Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 4:41 PM
My best friends parents divorced the year he graduated from highschool. I'm not sure that it's ever easy on the kids. There's the curb, don't stumble. Kind of abrupt. hhhhhh. :/ :) Peace. :)
Horne Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 2:29 PM
yes, such words of wisdom here!
Undertaker Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 2:21 AM
Andrea we are in the process of identifying the golden mean by touching the two extremes.
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 10:34 PM
Love the sentiment. Love the poem.
Fisher Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Loved this story in the Etheree format. Seems like a fun challenge, that you met.
Delaney Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:03 PM
Yes the children get caught in the middle which is heartbreaking...most thoughtful poem. Hugs, SuZ
Chircop Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 3:31 PM
: )..Very entertaining thoughts... Penguins are more human i guess..lol : )
Andresen Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 1:54 PM
:)))) - Love it, Andrea !!! - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Maverick Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 11:45 AM
Enjoyed your write on the possibiliys of new horizons Andrea, you will not be hearing from me for a while which may make some smile.." However I wish all here all the best irrespective take care Joe..)
Horsch Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 11:05 AM
You make me laugh, I am still trying to figure you out. But I liked your poem. Until next time.....Roger
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