Polar Opposites

Guided by the very hand of God you right
The wrongs in perfect dramatic prologue
Written carefully no emotional sight
Do you want it, yes, no? Frowning frog
Kiss your imaginary prince
Imaginary your life's sense.
I dread the dark in your tensed up smile dear;
Kills the essence awhile and angrily sit
A spell till it passes and stills quiet here
Like a windless plain so deemed unfit
Dark widow, unbalanced life
Take my hand take this knife
 
 Bleed for another, to stop within
 Hell you feel your undying sin!

But you are not harmed, it is written!
Ever so clearly if you would have just listened!
Lo' the angels tears ask for clarity
Here it is, another chance for it;
Mental polity begs a polar opposite
So politely I beg your pardon's light
I kiss your cheek and send you off
To pull hell further down, chide its scoff;
Heaven kisses angels

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/17/2012 12:23:00 PM
Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Tim. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 1/16/2012 10:58:00 PM
Tim... undying sin... i love the title... thought it was a collaboration... thanks for sharing,..p.d.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/15/2012 8:48:00 AM
Reminds me of all the drama in the rights and wrongs of my life. Tim. Great verse for a thinker to ponder on my friend. :)
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter