Gina Young Poet Free verse

Polar

You are nothing but electricity
I am the ground to drag you in,
It should be the other way
But you follow me.
I see the lightning shadows everywhere I look.
And thank you for the feeling.
All my hair stands on end.
My teeth are vibrating.

Ive never felt so alive.

You are all action and noise
I am the sea to hold you in,
It shouldnt be this easy
But I love you.
I feel you thrash against my waves.
And thank you for the timing.
My body will envelope you.
Your soul is my anti-filter.

Ive never felt so alive.

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Jay Loveless November 14, 2013 at 7:41 AM Damn powerful. I like it! Gina Young November 14, 2013 at 6:38 PM :) Thank u again friend.

Karen Anglesey June 19, 2013 at 8:57 AM Your descriptions really make the poem alive. Love the comparisons to electricity and a little crazy added into the mix. Energetic all the way through :) Gina Young July 1, 2013 at 4:23 PM Thank u much Karen!! And yes, definitely some crazy in there (and in most of my writing!). Will come by ur page soon :)

Kyle Kriticos June 17, 2013 at 2:47 PM Your poem is extremely enticing. I dig your style Gina! 7! Gina Young July 1, 2013 at 4:22 PM Thank u soo much Kyle! Im not on here a lot but promise to stop by and give u a read!

Shadow Hamilton June 9, 2013 at 4:35 AM one word beautiful Shadow x Gina Young June 9, 2013 at 7:32 PM thank you!!

Timothy Hicks June 7, 2013 at 12:57 AM This cut right to the quick... powerful wording, my friend! One feels truly alive when brushing against death. The person you describe sounds like a keeper... a slice of crazy is better than a slice of monotony, methinks! Gina Young June 7, 2013 at 7:05 PM Thank you! And I agree, dancing with death is a very quick way to invigorate a life. And yes, I will keep the slice of crazy lol :)

Arthur Vaso June 6, 2013 at 10:49 PM Very sensual and well written piece!!! Gina Young June 7, 2013 at 7:05 PM Thanx so much Arthur!

Poet Tacito June 6, 2013 at 10:38 AM Damn! A shock to the heart & mind, charging the soul. Ah, the way it should be. Awesome! Gina Young June 6, 2013 at 4:00 PM :) :) ~ Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2013 at 11:35 PM - Gina, a lovely poem .... very well written. - Thank you. - Have a nice day. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Gina Young June 5, 2013 at 11:38 PM Thank you much Anne-Lise! By the way, I love your name, its very pretty :)