Pol Prisoner of Life

room with no door
walls melting onto my naked soul
one window - landscape of despair
my feet...
              cemented into the floor...


iolandascripca@copyright2013
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Ekechukwu Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 5:02 PM
Well penned my dear,love your grand style. Haven't seen you comment on people's works,are u still with us? Am really concerned,will be delighted if you kindly rePly by commenting on one of my poems. Wishing you the best. Love and hugs, Always Baron Of Ebullion.
A   Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 8:54 PM
Happy Birthday to you..Happy Birthday to you.. happy birthday Dear Iolanda... happy birthday to you... hope you enjoy all the birthday blogs floating around... I posted a new one called... Don't Open Yet, for you and a few other Libra mates...... :-)...always~ Linda
A   Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 8:52 PM
wow Iolanda, this is reality for some.. this is a mighty good free verse.. powerful...LINDA
Jennings Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 7:33 PM
exactly dear, I think you pegged my day.
Scripca Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 10:55 PM
Thank you, Tahera and Poetic Justice...
Mannan Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 10:46 PM
I loved it on facebook. I love it even more now.
J.T. Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 10:37 PM
prisoners of life until we die. good poem
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