Poison Poppies

Power plant particled poison

                    People breathing pints per person

                              Pending paramedic pursuit

                                        Pushing poppies past the pigment




                                                                      11/26/17
                                                     Written for contest: "Alliteration"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 2:19 PM
Awesome - well done, Brian.
Davey Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Thank you
Haight Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 3:39 PM
Nicely done, Brian. Congrats on your win! Sandra
Davey Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Sandra
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 7:31 PM
Nicely done, Brian, congratulations on your win!
Davey Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 7:43 PM
Thank you Eve
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 4:47 PM
wonderful alliteration Brian:-):-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Davey Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 5:13 PM
Thank you Jan
Tripp Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 8:04 PM
This is an awesome alliteration. Well done.
Davey Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 9:36 PM
Thank you very much I appreciate you
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Some great alliteration!
Davey Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Thank you Kim!
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