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Poison Jars Contest

Poison ginger jars, Filled with white pills, Sticks of Smokey tar, While obsession over spills, wondering like a star, as you continually kill, Jars at local bars, And yet you casually still, Drive your late night car, A life furthest from filled, Drifting reckless and far You have lost your living will. By; Sabina Nicole written:1-20-12 contest: jar

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Date: 1/30/2012 3:30:00 AM
Congratulations Sabina x
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Date: 1/29/2012 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2012 12:21:00 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. Reminds me a bit of Blondie's "Rapture".
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Date: 1/28/2012 7:32:00 PM
great idea, the living will line. It could mean two things!! congrats with your win. Great topic you chose to do, things that are poisons for us all!
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:54:00 PM
Sabina congrats on your win..David
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:25:00 PM
congrats Sabina on a wonderful win for jars theme contest luv..
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Sabina.
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Date: 1/23/2012 7:07:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup!! the more flavors we can add the more spice of life we enjoy!!
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Date: 1/23/2012 7:06:00 PM
interesting work....sad subject...hopefully you are claer of the sickness and destruction.
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