Poison Jars Contest

Poison ginger jars,
Filled with white pills,
Sticks of Smokey tar,
While obsession over spills,
wondering like a star,
as you continually kill,
Jars at local bars,
And yet you casually still,
Drive your late night car,
A life furthest from filled,
Drifting reckless and far
You have lost your living will.


By; Sabina Nicole
written:1-20-12
contest: jar
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 3:30 AM
Congratulations Sabina x
Brown Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 12:21 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. Reminds me a bit of Blondie's "Rapture".
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 7:32 PM
great idea, the living will line. It could mean two things!! congrats with your win. Great topic you chose to do, things that are poisons for us all!
Williams Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 12:54 PM
Sabina congrats on your win..David
Sweetheart Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 12:25 PM
congrats Sabina on a wonderful win for jars theme contest luv..
Quigley Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your win Sabina.
Culverhouse Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 7:07 PM
welcome to poetry soup!! the more flavors we can add the more spice of life we enjoy!!
Culverhouse Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 7:06 PM
interesting work....sad subject...hopefully you are claer of the sickness and destruction.
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