Poison Is a Sweet Drink When One Is Denied Love

All the noisy critters, warblers and the morning, young horse rider
have taken with them spring's harmony;
no longer can galloping beats and songbirds make this black, forest
echo with their delightful sounds of felicity; 
winter has indeed stripped it of every beam of light and lovely flower.



That  handsome troubadour who came from France was happy,
too anxious to get to Florence and live in courts of prosperity
and galloping on the unpaved roads below the majestic Alps
never thought of his mademoiselle who was also dreaming,
drifting to places where true romance lived in sincere hearts,
but sadly this was done on wishful thinking
from a rose-bloomed balcony as Juliet did...
without the intention of ever being wed;
hear her loud cry, " Troubadours don't remain faithful
for long...their desire for adventure makes all null! " 



From that castle where noisy ravens gathered,
and shrilled, Marie with tearful eyes looked
over the enchanting black forest dullest than a grey, swelling cloud
which blocked the sunlight from entering her cold window
not frequented by a thrush that stayed behind
for unknown reasons and took shelter in the tower below;
" Poison is a sweet drink and when one is denied love! " she declared.
 

Copyright ( c ) 20015 by Andrew Crisci

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/5/2015 5:46:00 PM
Interesting take on the theme...especially like the title.
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Date: 5/5/2015 3:06:00 PM
Andrew, how are you? Haven't seen you around the contest page for a long while now. Glad seeing you again. Congratulations in "Winters End contest." Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 5/5/2015 11:01:00 AM
Andrew. Congratulations <3 thank you 4 supporting my "Winters End" contest. Forever ~SKAT~
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