Poison

love is like poison a lethal dose of arsenic straight in my veins and you sit there and push the plunger while you see the fear in my eyes as I beg you to stop yet you sit there as my eyes fill with tears then you are the last thing I see as my eyes glaze over then like that my life fades out as it cuts to black I hope your satisifed you get your life back while mine slowly fades to black

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2016 9:08:00 PM

AMY, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 5/8/2016 2:03:00 AM

Amy dejean, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/9/2011 5:44:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amy D. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Karen Croft

Date: 5/7/2011 6:54:00 PM

i have felt this feeling many times. beautifully done