Poison

Please spare me, have you no shame? 
pathetic poison prepped,
Underneath those displeasingly desperate diapers .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 6:35 AM
ha. I remember that too well!!
Empress Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 3:22 AM
Papi you did make me laugh but diapers? Are you sure? As always a very humorous take on the prompt! And you did alliterations too i see! There is no shame when the poison spitters spill their venom. Have you ever seen any shame from them ? I doubt! Congratulations on your win: sending you light
Onpaper Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 4:01 AM
Awwn thank u papi for choosing my piece …. Yeaaa.., They have no shame.. it’s a shame they can’t smell their own shit .. cox that crap is sooo smelly… dunno how the idiots around them can tolerate… I guess preference?… like there r ppl who love the smell of pure oud… but personally I think it smells like goat poop!!!
Rolland Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 7:27 AM
very immersive poem, some sufferings shared with "art" have a nice week end
Onpaper Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 4:03 AM
thank u … sometimes art is subjective
Rhymes Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 7:02 AM
lol who are we discussing ? Good luck
Onpaper Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Hahaha … some dum dum shitting bullshit … XD
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