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Poison

Please spare me, have you no shame? pathetic poison prepped, Underneath those displeasingly desperate diapers .

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Date: 5/29/2025 6:35:00 AM
ha. I remember that too well!!
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Date: 5/29/2025 3:22:00 AM
Papi you did make me laugh but diapers? Are you sure? As always a very humorous take on the prompt! And you did alliterations too i see! There is no shame when the poison spitters spill their venom. Have you ever seen any shame from them ? I doubt! Congratulations on your win: sending you light
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Date: 5/29/2025 4:01:00 AM
Awwn thank u papi for choosing my piece …. Yeaaa.., They have no shame.. it’s a shame they can’t smell their own shit .. cox that crap is sooo smelly… dunno how the idiots around them can tolerate… I guess preference?… like there r ppl who love the smell of pure oud… but personally I think it smells like goat poop!!!
Date: 5/23/2025 7:27:00 AM
very immersive poem, some sufferings shared with "art" have a nice week end
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Date: 5/29/2025 4:03:00 AM
thank u … sometimes art is subjective
Date: 5/13/2025 7:49:00 AM
Ha fully immersive poetry - sights, sounds and smells :) excellent!
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Date: 5/29/2025 4:01:00 AM
Hahahah it is smelly !!! Pure goat doodoo!!!! XD
Date: 5/13/2025 7:02:00 AM
lol who are we discussing ? Good luck
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Date: 5/13/2025 7:05:00 AM
Hahaha … some dum dum shitting bullshit … XD

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