Pointless Envy

I see a girl walking
How thin she is!
And I can't help but wonder...
Could I be that thin???
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 9:58 PM
Envy is a useless emotion. We were all born different so the world is filled with variety and differences. Uniqueness is a good thing,
Greenlee Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Be you.Who cares about what you look like.It is who you are as a person that counts.Envy is just a nasty feeling to have when you are really a beautiful person.Believe that yourself others will follow.Have a great day love...
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