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Pointing To The Problems

POINTING TO THE PROBLEMS {Bivouacs} Beat down with legal fees Tied up with taxes; Tripped up with mortgages; Ripped off with student loans Insulted with insurance Telephone updates. Out of date opts, New upgrade rates; Food on the down-low Carrots in the closet; Conjugating with fake rice. Plastic cabbage, inedible corn. Tomatoes with fish dung Water with lead, flatulent cows Polluting the air. Carbon emission: Beyond the stratosphere: Halliburton and agent orange. Nuclear explosion -radiation; Devastating the atmosphere. I can’t explain, with no nutrients to the brain. No minerals to the lungs n heart. Contaminated nation; Sheer contamination. Is it too late, to rise above the hate? Tired n Devastated, tried elevation. Tried to immunize, and fine tune My body to this new moon. With herbs n mushrooms. Sun Hot, Global Scorching... Illuminati wants hearts, and good body parts. Neanderthals,running back to their caves Underground bunkers, where they’ll be safe… Americans dangling off bridges with knapsacks; Flimsy structures and Bivouacs No air, no food, no heat, Not even water safe to drink. Like Dinosaurs and bees, fast becoming extinct. I can’t even think, with no nutrients to the brain. No minerals to fortify lungs n heart. Contaminated nation, Sheer contamination. With nowhere to run; What do you think should be done?

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Date: 12/5/2019 2:53:00 PM
You speak our minds! Cry of the whole world at the moment!
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Date: 12/5/2019 2:40:00 PM
The World is not going to end anytime soon. You are still free to speak up and speak out. You did a good job doing so. May the lord always be by your side.
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Date: 7/30/2017 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for highlighting some of the most painful things we are facing in this day and age. I think humanity needs to be reminded of its value and worth in order for us to be redeemed.
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Date: 7/21/2017 2:03:00 PM
I suppose we should start in each of our little corners of the world and try our best to expand. If left up to government...well, hennywoo; anyhoo; I agree; well penned and honest.
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 7/23/2017 12:12:00 PM
Today seized captured in a poem after the eclipse and the strangeness feeling powerless God, handle's his business.
Date: 7/21/2017 8:41:00 AM
I haven't a clue, wish I did. I read your poetry regularly and I'm always amazed and challenged. Your expressions provide a feast within a famine of mundanity. ~ john
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 10/1/2017 8:02:00 PM
JOHN THIS IS ONE OF MY MOST CHERISHED COMMENTS. THANKS.