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when he pulled the trigger,within his boots, his legs shook; too his narrow shoulders, but his conscience not; he smiled

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Date: 2/24/2016 6:53:00 PM
Kamangu Waithaka, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:37:00 PM
Kamangu Waithaka, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 8/5/2013 6:33:00 PM
really like it :) welcome to soup.... hope you like it here.. if you have time take a look at my poems, i think we can learn from each other. :)
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:41:00 AM
short,simple and poetic....weldone, bring more..
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