Point Taken

Jan's cucumber is on display
To many a mother's dismay
They all hope and pray
Their daughters won't say,
"The nuns never use it that way!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Laurie Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 6:44 PM
G'day Rico ... you are a witty bugger Rico and I love it - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 10:36 AM
I'll never catch up to you with just five lines! Aloha! Rico
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 11:16 PM
Thank you for this entertaining and clever poem him tonight Rico. Aloha, Connie
Leffanta Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 11:09 AM
Thank you for the kind words, Connie! I hope you enjoyed the beautiful sunset! Aloha! Rico
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 5:51 PM
I guess the daughters find that cucumber quite appealing! lol. :) gw
Leffanta Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 11:08 AM
It seems, "slash and burn" is more appealing in the USA! Aloha! Rico
Bauer Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 4:26 PM
another gem, rico! keep 'em coming! (no pun intended...)
Leffanta Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Thank you for the laugh, Ilene! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 11:34 AM
ha ha ha you made me splutter my tea then - watch out the porno blog hog will be on red alert at the mention of cucumbers lol:-) write on Rico keep us entertained with your witty words:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Too many funerals, not enough cucumbers! Aloha! Rico
Hankins Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 11:23 AM
LOL. Well, I certainly hope not...either way! I'm sure the nuns use them in salads, Rico! But, they do make a fine pickle, too.
Leffanta Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 12:02 PM
"Out of the mouths of babes" is a surprise to most parents. Aloha! Rico
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