Point of View

Barefoot in a field of daisies hair blowing in the breeze smile beaming ear to ear babbling brook streaming nearby A picture, no words A story, unheard Sunrays shining down from the cerulean morning sky a parasol twirling in her hand shading those beamish eyes The cottage of stone hidden in a bed of spruce trees ashen smoke flowing from the ancient chimney A picture, no words A story, unheard The picture won't change It's what you construe Each story may vary based on a point of view Pictures, paintings, natural beauty drawings, photos, or sculptures A picture, no words A story, unheard

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/3/2015 6:11:00 AM
I enjoy this poem transporting me from my desk to nature's course in early light of dawn. I see hear smell. I am delighted with such views. Thank you. Stay blessed.
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Date: 1/24/2015 7:38:00 AM
beautifully painted as always tim excellent pen dear pal
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Date: 1/22/2015 1:10:00 PM
the beauty of a flower is indescribable!.. a most pleasant commentary, tim.. huggs
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Date: 1/22/2015 12:14:00 PM
A poem on an unheard story, nice write Tim... loved it... hugs, nad!
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Date: 1/21/2015 10:31:00 AM
"cerulean morning sky a parasail twirling in her hand" about to loft? Love Tim>rajat
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Date: 1/21/2015 5:56:00 AM
Descending from heaven words that fill the soul with beauty, dear Tim!
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:37:00 AM
Daises are my favourite flowers.They are simple yet wild and strong..Owing a beauty of their own...and that babbling brook,the cottage and smokey chimney..I want a picture like this in my living room.Fantastic!A fav.
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Date: 1/20/2015 6:53:00 PM
Tim this is well written my friend, could you let me know the name of the author---Just Kidding---please forgive me---you did a great job on this one. cheers
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Date: 1/20/2015 5:50:00 PM
I really like your free verse Tim, my very dear friend. Very nice pen! I enjoyed the freedom of it and the imagery well is very fantastic. A 7 from me! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^
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