Point of View

Barefoot in a field of daisies hair blowing in the breeze smile beaming ear to ear babbling brook streaming nearby A picture, no words A story, unheard Sunrays shining down from the cerulean morning sky a parasol twirling in her hand shading those beamish eyes The cottage of stone hidden in a bed of spruce trees ashen smoke flowing from the ancient chimney A picture, no words A story, unheard The picture won't change It's what you construe Each story may vary based on a point of view Pictures, paintings, natural beauty drawings, photos, or sculptures A picture, no words A story, unheard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 6:11 AM
I enjoy this poem transporting me from my desk to nature's course in early light of dawn. I see hear smell. I am delighted with such views. Thank you. Stay blessed.
Mcdaid Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 7:38 AM
beautifully painted as always tim excellent pen dear pal
Onclaud Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 1:10 PM
the beauty of a flower is indescribable!.. a most pleasant commentary, tim.. huggs
Relish Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 12:14 PM
A poem on an unheard story, nice write Tim... loved it... hugs, nad!
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 10:31 AM
"cerulean morning sky a parasail twirling in her hand" about to loft? Love Tim>rajat
Trifiatis Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 5:56 AM
Descending from heaven words that fill the soul with beauty, dear Tim!
Chircop Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Daises are my favourite flowers.They are simple yet wild and strong..Owing a beauty of their own...and that babbling brook,the cottage and smokey chimney..I want a picture like this in my living room.Fantastic!A fav.
Curtis Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Tim this is well written my friend, could you let me know the name of the author---Just Kidding---please forgive me---you did a great job on this one. cheers
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 5:50 PM
I really like your free verse Tim, my very dear friend. Very nice pen! I enjoyed the freedom of it and the imagery well is very fantastic. A 7 from me! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^
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