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"I see a flower. ‘Daffodil’ I call it. A gift to my crystal vase." Her eyes smile Like a sun-poured flower. “I see a devil. ‘Human’, they call them. Goodbye to my mother earth.” Her petals shine like frozen tears .

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Date: 3/24/2012 7:06:00 AM
Very nicely written. Thank you adding your creation to the soup. Love this one. Write on please.
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Umme Salma Alam
Date: 3/26/2012 6:04:00 AM
Inspiring! thanks!
Date: 3/20/2012 8:58:00 AM
Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Umme. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol
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Umme Salma Alam
Date: 3/26/2012 6:05:00 AM
Hey Carol! How are days going for you?Thanks a lot for your appreciation!
Date: 3/19/2012 8:37:00 AM
sad thoughts this am...well written!!
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Umme Salma Alam
Date: 3/26/2012 6:06:00 AM
Thanks for reading Doris !:)

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