Point of View

"I see a flower.
‘Daffodil’ I call it.
A gift to my crystal vase."
Her eyes smile
Like a sun-poured flower.

“I see a devil.
‘Human’, they call them.
Goodbye to my mother earth.”
Her petals shine like frozen tears .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dey Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 7:06 AM
Very nicely written. Thank you adding your creation to the soup. Love this one. Write on please.
Alam Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 6:04 AM
Inspiring! thanks!
Brown Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 8:58 AM
Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Umme. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol
Alam Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Hey Carol! How are days going for you?Thanks a lot for your appreciation!
Culverhouse Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 8:37 AM
sad thoughts this am...well written!!
Alam Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Thanks for reading Doris !:)
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