Point of No Return

As you started to clime that ladder you looked like an angle ascending to the heavens. And for a moment just a moment you almost put a smile on my face.Like i told you before they aint got much room for people like us up there. People like us belong somewhere different. So as i lied there suffering alone with my own thoughts. I started to fell hell's brim stones crashing down on me. And the pain the pain man the pain. It started to fell euphoric and it was right at that moment i felt like i failed you. But i only failed myself. If you want to spend all of you pathetic existence wallering in a pit of your own misery then be my guest. Understand your demons mold you. But understand i mold the demons and they march to my command. The devil works in mysterious ways. What is mine is mine and it will always be. Congratulations this is a celebration we have finely reached the point of no return. And what happens next will change you i am going to dissect you. I am going to clime that ladder and look down at your lifeless body.And i will finely be able to smile. And i will smile because i finely put you back where you belong. In the dirt with rest of the insects.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/10/2014 10:38:00 AM
I'm not trying to be mean, but before you submit your poem check that it's spelled correctly and has good grammar. Other than that, this is pretty good.
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