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Poem is autobiographical.  I took some Boy Scouts and Cub Scouts out hiking at Point Lobos nature preserve, which is just south of Carmel, California

Last Fall, my church's Scouts and I went hiking. A few miles north of Big Sur’s coast, There is a forested park much to our liking. Point Lobos is the nature preserve that I love most. The beauty there is supernal, beyond description. We chose our trails with maps and compasses, And practiced local plant identification. I pointed out Monterey Pines and Cypresses. For a time we climbed a steep inclination. We looked down into a cove, home of sea otters, From a viewpoint near the old whalers’ station. We climbed through a cleft worn down by waters. That Saturday outing wasn’t a total disaster. The boys passed tasks to advance in ranks. Life doesn’t get much better for an old Scoutmaster. Lastly, to the Great Spirit we all gave thanks. For Goethe Stanzas contest

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