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Poets of a New Dawn

Taking a long ink dip in a desert pond, rejected drake words ripple echoes in the wilderness: Tread with care! Dreadnought thoughts silicate crystalized, glass menagerie opens to a darkening sky Wing-tipped metal muse raised to the foreboding air, infusing liquid lightning to the bard birds Watching intently as the anti-gravity atoms abscond, executive electrocution is on a delay timer Prose avian sentries see Splitting anti-social charges seep into the hate-soaked, polluted atmosphere These momentous crisis changes, poets of a new dawn articulate so very clear Tho’ labeled by a scornful society as being conscientious ugly ducklings, the fear factor in the swirling wind keeps increasing it’s whirl war buffeting Incoming V-formation of ionized mallard birds dropping kinetic malevolent words Stork deliver radiation babies — Blackhawk moving targets that glow with surgical stealth Caesarian precision Whilst the designated survivors be the fleeing flock having open duck ears Poets of a new dawn continually pen agitate strong current ripples in the desert pond Letting their U2 ugly quill mirage liquidity dose infect the minds of those who syringe swan dive in beautiful disbelief

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/6/2018 12:55:00 AM
Yikes Freddie a word mechanic and a prophetic vision of a darkness. Metallic ducks and stuff ! You are such a powerful visionary my friend. I get it I get it. Love across the ocean from me to my brother. Jannie
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Date: 4/17/2018 7:32:00 AM
Totally loving this avian assault on the senses and should I be one of those New Dawn Poets, don't wake me until the war is over. Fantastic.
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Date: 4/14/2018 4:58:00 PM
Awesome interweaving of bird analogy and referencing poets as such, a very difficult modern write but artfully done, really amazing poetry Freddie, you are a one of a kind poet on this site!
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Date: 4/10/2018 11:38:00 PM
This is a modern poem ... not found much in the soup ... or maybe I have not read much ... the last six lines keep lingering, Freddie ...
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Date: 4/10/2018 6:12:00 PM
Wow! Radiation babies! Dreadnought thoughts! Syringe swan! I could go on and on Freddie. This is awesome and a fave for me!
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Date: 4/10/2018 4:39:00 AM
Iam in awe of the massive amount of creativity required to have thought of and then composed this brilliant poem. I read it three times , to make sure I got all of it that my mind could absorb my friend. I have to say-- BRAVO!!! A fav...
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