Poet's Dozen - the First Date

Roses on table,
Glowing candles everywhere,
The most perfect date!

She looks so stunning tonight.
Her dress are sparkling too bright.

Our legs are dancing with the music.
Feeling light and hope that this won’t end.

I waited for so long on our first date.
Knowing that this is our sweetest time.
Oh it’s unforgettable to be with you Kate.
Can probably write poems with a perfect rhyme.
Can we make it to a next climb?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 16, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Lei, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~
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January 9, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Congratulations on poem and win. Love, Joyce
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January 9, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Lei, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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