Poet's Death

Early morning
A kit of poet pigeons fly
In pursuit of metaphors

They turn around Swoyambhunath
Releasing deep breathe out of anxiety,
Facing noble eyes of that stupa
They discuss something,
Expel feces and glide towards
An old monastery where
A poet was writing poem, under its silhouette

Abruptly the poet gets stormed by the kit of pigeons

They furiously plucked
Poet's  eyes
His nose
His ears
His tongue and
His brain

Accumulating all those organs
They composed a beautiful poem
And soared into the sky
To recite in front of Gautam Buddha

Those pigeons,
Who assaulted and killed the poet,
were the metaphors inside his own poem,  suffocated for ages!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 12, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Nadeesh Nadeesh , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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June 14, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Hi Linda, I surely desire constructive criticism to my creations. That will be more helpful. I usually write in my national language, and now trying to write some in English language too. Thank you so much.
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June 10, 2016 at 8:12 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Nadeeh. :)
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June 10, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Thanks Moon.
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June 9, 2016 at 6:03 PM
Nadeesh, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
Nadeesh  Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Sure SKAT, thank you so much.
Smith Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Very nicely written piece Nadeesh.
Nadeesh  Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Thanks, Tim.
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