Poets Anthem---Vs--3

V:

in the car here we are driving down the street
conversing with one another
the blurs and visions of passersby
though no one we shall meet
our flight into one continuous chime
phenomenal thoughts our voices shine
every verse spoken is a new and improved rhyme
a red light blinds us and we slow to a halt
words stop short for a moment
it's no ones fault
leaning over to taste your lips
you sense me coming
you turn
we kiss
look into my eyes and i promise you'll find
one last verse to ease your mind
open your heart
i promise I'll be kind
we are alone again just you and me
connected in ways that are meant to be
massaging your aching muscles
my fingers in motion
feeling you jerk when i pour on cold lotion
quiet in my movements
you are now asleep
in your silence you look blissful
you look serene
i kiss you goodnight
we are meant to be


C:

i dream in the future us having a kid
at that time living in the same crib
like a prisoner taking a shiv
that's how i feel when we're apart
when we met i felt that spark
fell in love, you made your mark
i dread the day if we were to part
lets get rid of these thoughts we are together forever




********************* If you want the true meaning of the song I urge you to read the 
poem in it's entirety starting with verse one...... JP............01/12/03
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 11:14 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jared. Love, Carol
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June 15, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Congrats. On your Free Verse being featured this week Jared. agape, Moses
Fisher Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Jared..another wonderful featured piece. Rgds Janette
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June 14, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Congrats Jared on your featured poem this week on the Soup...the Poets Anthem shines loudly and proudly my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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June 14, 2010 at 12:36 PM
This is a wonderful piece, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke
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June 13, 2010 at 7:25 PM
Congrats Jared on your featured write. Vince
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June 13, 2010 at 6:48 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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July 21, 2009 at 10:24 AM
Very good of youu to share, thanks, God bless, Moses!
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July 21, 2009 at 8:14 AM
i t is a love song--romantic and flowing--love the style--great job--charma
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July 7, 2009 at 12:52 PM
love it!!!
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jared. Carol
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