Poetry Wheel Says...... 

 
In the pretty pink sand I sit, on a tropical island that is sunlit.  
The blue water is very calm, in the distance with a huge black palm.  
The clouds are taking a break, no rain for the weather's sake.  
I love there is no time here, my alarm clock can bring me no fear.  
Dreams are taking me far away, I want to stay for another day.   
Poetry Wheel Says...... Theme: Dreams Emotion: Calm Color: Black Season: Tropical Form: Couplet Object: Clock Verb: Break
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Croft Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 6:15 AM
The poetry wheel is a great opportunity to create poems! Love your creativity!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 12:42 PM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Glad you love my fun write. It was fun to write. I really need a vacation. Sure wish I was on a beach with the blue water/sand/palm trees. None here, so sad.  Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
Edmonds  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 8:24 AM
A lovely take on the the Poetry Wheel theme Paula, it’s so hot here it seems we’re living an English tropical dream… Beryl 🔥
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 12:42 PM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Glad you found this to be, A lovely take on the the Poetry Wheel theme.  It was fun to write.  I really need a vacation. Sure wish I was on a beach with the blue water/sand/palm trees. None here, so sad. Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
Godwin Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 3:23 AM
I have been gone so much these past months that I have yet to know all about the new stuff such as the POETRY WHEEL. BUT, I love your whimsical, happy poem and would love to live in it. (I don't know that I have enough time to write, post, read, comment and Do the New. I like that, 'hi, do you do the new?' I'm a silly girl. CayCay (am I to vote or some such thing?)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 12:42 PM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun write. I really need a vacation. Sure wish I was on a beach with the blue water/sand/palm trees. None here/so sad. I took 2 weeks off in June. Came back to a ton of work (home/computer) I took last Sat of/now have so much work to do. Soup started some contests. I have done a couple of them. I keep running out of time. Great to see you here. I must read on your page. Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
Gibbons Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 9:24 PM
Hey Paula love your write✍️ on the wheel right dreamy write made me wanna join u in your breathtaking dream gotta fav this today hugzzz friend ❤️‍🩹🕊️🌙have a fab weekend ✍️
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 12:41 PM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Glad you love my fun write. It was fun to write. I really need a vacation. Sure wish I was on a beach with the blue water/sand/palm trees. None here, so sad.  Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 4:47 PM
Ha. Alarm clock bringing no fear. I really hate when my alarm goes off. Good one, Paula
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 12:41 PM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Glad you found this to be a, Good one. It was fun to write. I also hate when the alarm goes off.  I really need a vacation. Sure wish I was on a beach with the blue water/sand/palm trees. None here, so sad. Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
Sands Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 9:09 AM
This is excellent. So nice to read today. Blessings :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 12:29 PM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Glad you found this to be, So nice to read today. It was fun to write. I really need a vacation. Sure wish I was on a beach with the blue water/sand/palm trees. None here, so sad. Hugs... Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
George Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 1:46 AM
This is beautiful . This stay on the serene ocean shore is so relaxing. Lovely couplets.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 11:34 AM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Glad you found this to be, beautiful. I really need a vacation. Sure wish I was on a beach with the blue water/sand/palm trees. None here, so sad. Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
Scragg Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 4:18 PM
Lovely poem Paula 😊 Your title made me smile... it reminded me of the game "Simon Says" so in filling the requirement followed by the info of what the wheel said, it was like you were playing this game with the wheel. Pretty clever and fun😄😉🌺🌺🌺
Goldsmith Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 11:33 AM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Glad you found this to be a, Lovely poem. I am so happy I made you smile. Smiles are free so give them away. Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 2:32 PM
Paula, nicely done for the wheel challenge.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 11:32 AM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Glad you found this to be, nicely done for the wheel challenge. I hope it is right. First time doing it. Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:56 PM
I am guessing it is for a contest, if so, I would say it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Aren't vacations great. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K. 👍
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 1:42 PM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Oh yes, vacations are great. I really need one. Sure wish I was on a beach with the blue water/sand/palm trees. None here, so sad. Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:14 PM
- A lovely poem ... how wonderful it would have been to be there ... just enjoying the sun and the sea :) - The challenge is perfect, Paula :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 1:41 PM
Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Poetry Wheel Says......" write. A Big Thank You... Glad you found this to be, A lovely poem. I sure wish I was on a beach with the water/sand/palm trees. None here, so sad.  Hugs... Have A Creative/Fun Day Writing Away...............
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 11:34 AM
"Poetry Wheel Says......" ~ Date Written:8/10/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet.......
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