Jessica Arteaga Poet Rhyme

Poetry Soupers a Question!

just had a thought of a wonder,
of everyone's age.
see how we are different,
though on the same page.
I feel rather young,
but I'm not that much older.
I read so many poems,
and their views on my shoulders.
just a mere question
I wanted to ask...
How old are you guys?
22 is mine! if you were to ask.











(wanted to know the age range around here, also being nosy of everyone's age :P)

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire November 28, 2009 at 6:35 PM Dear Jessica, I'm old enough to remember the days of Family Outings Just crank up the car and go until it started to rain and YOU had to put the pedal to the metal and race home at 35 miles an hour. Great Writting ALWAYS... HG

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet October 16, 2009 at 1:31 PM I'm 51 and this is a terrific read.I really liked this one.Thanks for your kind words on my read.I thought a squirrel was better than an apple.Teresa

James Knox August 12, 2009 at 5:05 PM age ... hmmmm !!! they say age is just a number but i hate my number, every one says i look 24 so ill just leave it at that lol

Frances King August 12, 2009 at 4:10 PM I'm with Carol, just multiply you by 3 ...

Carrie Richards August 12, 2009 at 12:28 PM Older than you, but young at heart....that's what counts !! :) !!

James Fraser August 12, 2009 at 11:24 AM In one and a half years i will be Hawaii 50 - duh duh duh duh duh duh, and you do write really well Jessica>>James

Sara Kendrick August 12, 2009 at 10:28 AM I'm way old with antiquated ideas but I'm having fun and learning. I am past retirement age. Glad to met Jessica age 22. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 12, 2009 at 9:44 AM Oh Jessica I have seen 22 almost 3 times now. That is an accomplishment almost. Have a great day dear. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins August 12, 2009 at 9:22 AM I was once 22...it was a beautiful journey..brings back memories....my age?....older than Carolyn who is only 25.

Carolyn Devonshire August 12, 2009 at 9:14 AM Mystery adds to the spice of life. I am older than you, but my age remains a mystery even to me. LOL You write so well for a young person, Jessica! Love, Carolyn